Sunday, 4 September 2011

Finger Fucked

This was an interesting one.  Chuck Wendig's terrible minds challenge was to craft a story about revenge. Sounds simple, n'est-ce pas? Of course there was a kicker and this time we only had 100 words to tell the whole story. Since I have a tendency to kinda go over the word count on these challenges (dun-dun-dun!) the real trick wasn't telling the story, so much as telling the story in as few words as possible. Coming in at exactly 100 words is Finger Fucked. 
Please to enjoy.



Candy felt the sweat and semen pool between her legs. She grabbed the pack of smokes on her bedside stand and lit two up, offered the second one to the equally sweaty man lying in bed beside her. He took it with his left hand and Candy couldn't help staring at the large wedding ring he had on.  She reached down and grabbed another large thing of his. She took a drag from her cig and blew out smoke that twisted about in the afternoon sun.



This'll teach that bitch Jenny from accounting to mess with me, she thought, smiling.


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